Wednesday, May 13, 2009

Poem-ish Thing? :P

He said you're pretty alright
Not too bad -- you'll do for now
Give me your attention, baby
I like your hair, I like your style
And I like the way you make me smile
He said I'll wrap you 'round my finger
Break your heart and watch you fall


He said you're incredible
Wonderful -- you make me proud
Put all your faith in me, darling
I love your heart. You're so unique
I'm the only one you'll ever need
He said I'll walk with you forever
Pick you up and break your fall

[Don't change at all you're beautiful]

I wrote this a while ago when I realized I was worrying more about guys than God. It doesn't mean I'm saying guys are bad or anything :P I just needed to focus more on filling the "hole" in my life with God instead of thinking a guy can fill it.

5 comments:

A&A said...

this is incredible. =)

Anonymous said...

Brooke this is amazing! Really super good plus its true. I'm glad you found peace.

Anonymous said...

Nice! :D My critique would be: Make it into a song, record it, and be an instant hit. :)

Jonah said...

Beautiful!!

Brooke Marie said...

Nate, that'd be a really good idea if I could sing or play an instrument :P