Thursday, January 29, 2009

A little piece of my soul :P

I NEVER show things I write.. so this is pretty exclusive ;)


I wish it would just go away
The addiction, contagious. The anger; I'm faking. The pain.
You come in out of nowhere and want to be my friend
I'm falling over again.
Will you be there in the end?

I give more than I can take
'Cuz you don't offer enough. I called your bluff when
You said
You'd never let me down
I'm falling over again.
You'll never come around.
I said
All the hate I'm pretending is just my heart defending and
I said
Someday you'll wake up and see
You got the best of me.
I'm falling over again.

And I'm sorry you're blind
To all the fights worth fighting.
Looking back; All the times
You've pushed me out. Far away. You're fading away.
You've failed me again. Oh, your excuses.
You've fallen over again.
Loving you is useless.
And I can't do this.
I've fallen over again.


You won't be there in the end.



P.S.- don't ask me who this is about :P... I have a weird way of writing :P

3 comments:

Jonah said...

WOW!!!! Emo poems usually bore me, but you've clearly listened to so much screamo that you've got the flow down pat ;)

No, seriously, this is good! You definitely have a talent for poetry- most emo poems consist of... pretty much nothing, but yours had definite unity and rhythm to it.

Brooke Marie said...

haha! well thanks!

I must say, when the little Gtalk notification popped up and said "Jonah Selner left a comment on your blog: WOW!!!! Emo poems. . . . . . ." I thought it was going to be bad ;)

A&A said...

i like it. =)